trying to write a poem

hii, how r u ?
im fine and so r u .
dont drink water right after u eat ,
dont try to know me soon after we meet .

is this a poem ?? hmm there r rhyming words , whats the difference between poems and rhymes ? rhymes r for children and poems are for emotionally sick people .

it starts with hii, sounds friendly but the nxt line is rude .
then the 3rd line had a health tip , 4th line displays some attitude .

lots of things conveyed in 4 lines .ya , i know , dont start praising me now itself , there are many more to come .

ok i think i can even beat shakespeare , lets see .....

cow , dove , stove .

cow eats grass,
love eats hearts.

dove is prettier than the cow
love is prettier than the dove .( do u understand ?? love is the prettiest among the three , a lil difficult to understand but pls try .read again . )

if u want something hot , light a stove .
u wanna know life a lot .. fall in love .

i really cried while writing the last two lines .

now abt nature .... hello Mr william wordsworth ,wherever u r , 

About wordsworth , they say he is the nature poet .
see his name, wordsworth , his words are worth reading . words + worth .
i read from wiki that he was born in Cockermouth in Cumberland.

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